You are totally right about that sentence, I'll go fix it! Thanks for pointing it out.
I can't believe you haven't read the first part, the first part is the best part, it contains the hot sex scene! :D Ah well, I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, well done for understanding what was going on, I don't think I would!
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Date: 2007-08-29 11:54 pm (UTC)I can't believe you haven't read the first part, the first part is the best part, it contains the hot sex scene! :D Ah well, I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway, well done for understanding what was going on, I don't think I would!